Unnatural: A Collection of Supernatural Stories by Michael Loring (Review by Melanie V””V – #NerdGirlVamp)


Title: Unnatural: A Collection of Supernatural Stories

Author:  Michael Loring 

Published Date: March 15th 2014

Genre:  Paranormal Anthology


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From the vault of Author Michael Loring’s warped mind comes this brand new collection of short stories. UNNATURAL: A COLLECTION OF SUPERNATURAL STORIES is as the title says: a collection of shorts revolving around the supernatural and paranormal.

THE FOX IN THE FIELD: A mischievous fox makes a plan for an engaged couple…

THE WEREWOLF’S MATE: A vampire tries to steal a werewolf’s boyfriend…

NO FORGIVENESS: A man takes a demon lover…

NUMBER 18: A rapist stalks his eighteenth victim…

DEATH’S EXPRESSION: A man faces the Grim Reaper…

CARPE DIEM: A man learns the intricacies of the afterlife…

THE WALLFLOWER’S COLLAPSE: A woman tries to shed her wallflower ways…

This collection of stories will shock you, horrify you, make you wonder, and caution you. Each tale with its own genre, its own world, and its own story to be told.


***Adult Warning – May Contain Graphic Sex, Strong Language, Or Adult Situations. Caution Advised***
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***Melanie  -#NerdGirlVamp’s  Review***
This is the first book I have read by Michael Loring and it is an interesting collection of short paranormal stories.

This set definitely had potential with a few little twists that I didn’t see coming and a general air of good supernatural ideas. It fell short for me unfortunately with some of the actual writing which I feel could perhaps benefit from the help of a good editor. Here and there the prose, for me, became a little wordy and required re-reading to grasp what was trying to come across.

Add to that a couple of the short stories were REALLY short, which was a shame because I felt that there was more story that could be told, overall it ended up falling in the middle of the ratings for me.

3 stars but it definitely had the potential for more.



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  • Michael Loring

    Thank you for your honest opinion ^_^

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